Thursday, October 30, 2008

Engaging Beginning

The turn of the 19th century lead to many great and horrific things. Such as WWI and the great depression. With all these hard things happening how could anyone make anything of their self. Well the turn of the 19th century also lead to something else important, the birth of Walt Disney. Walt is one of the most successful entrepreneurs of the 20th century. Even with all these hard things going on around him he was able to make something of himself. He even served in red cross at only the age of 16, only for a year driving an ambulance and chauffeuring Red Cross officials. There is more to Walt Disney then people think. He wasn't only a good artist with a vivid imageination. He had it all from creativaty to marketing skills. Walt Disney was truly a master of the bussiness trade.

1 comment:

Mr. Ackerman said...

This is a good start. There are a lot of grammatical errors in your Engaging Beginning. Capitalize Great Depression, add a question mark to the end of your second sentence - and there are a few more errors as well.

Grade: Outstanding.