Graduation 2011

Hello reader and welcome to my blog. I have picked this essay to rewrite about because I wrote it ealier in the year and i wanted to see how much I have progressed. Also becuase I am very serious about my schoolwork and my graduation in 2011. If i may say i think my introduction,transitional sentecnces, and my conclusion is very well written. I know you will enjoy these parts as much as i do.



Graduation 2011


Four years seems like a long time. Who knows what can happen in four years? Well let me let you in on a little secret I know. That is right I know four years from now I will be up on stage and hear my name called to get my diploma. The reasons why I know this is because I am smart, persistent, and my family supports me.

Let me start out with that I am a very intelligent. I know this because I always get good grades. I’ve have been getting them my whole school career. I also know this because I am always getting complimented on my school work and how professional I act.

On top of that my family motivates me to stay in school. Both of my parents graduated high school and my brother is a senior in Central. They are always there to pick me up when I am down and help me with my homework. They also play little roles when I start my day. I don’t think I would ever get to school on time if it wasn’t for my mom waking me up everyday.

In addition to that I am very persistent. I want to graduate to make a better life for myself. No matters what will happen I will stay in school and get my diploma. I will stay into school to keep of the streets and out of trouble. There is no way I can get into trouble if I keep my head in the books and my eyes on the goal of graduation.

I will graduate in 2011 because I am intelligent, my family supports me, and for the main fact I want to graduate. Four years from now I know where I will be. Do you?